Author Topic: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread  (Read 35792 times)

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #90 on: December 09, 2009, 10:53:06 pm »
It's pretty much impossible for it to not have this problem, but based on what Nagato said, if you just save in a handful of places around chapter 8 (I assume on both sides of the Inner Voices segment and/or the choice) you'll prolly be able to get to ch9 with a minimum of ctrling.
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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #91 on: December 12, 2009, 12:01:08 pm »
Sorry if it isn't supposed to be posted here, but I couldn't find any thread for reporting mistakes etc. in text:
(Chapter 2)
-[Kia] Wh-what's that? A present!?
I only get something like this once a year!
+[Ati] Wh-what's that? A present!?
I only get something like this once a year!

Also, some other things to take care of are in this txt file:
[look at my next post]

Not sure if they weren't fixed yet, since I wrote them down quite a while ago, but w/e lol.
« Last Edit: December 12, 2009, 02:58:11 pm by uey111 »

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #92 on: December 12, 2009, 12:16:08 pm »
Edit: Nevermind, I see how it could be considered an error now. It's also like that in the Japanese though, so I don't know how Ixrec will want to handle it.

By the way, your megaupload file isn't working ("The file you are trying to access is temporarily unavailable.").
« Last Edit: December 12, 2009, 12:32:37 pm by Nagato »

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #93 on: December 12, 2009, 02:57:36 pm »
If it's temporarily, then it's ok =p
As the word says, it doesn't work only temporarily.

Another small correction, from chapter 6:
-The women told many stories.
Those who'd lost so much and been picked up by Alisa.
Those who couldn't find any other way to live.
+The women told many stories.
Those who'd lost so much and had been picked up by Alisa.
Those who couldn't find any other way to live.

Ah, and if you DL the file, ignore the second mistake written for chapter 2, dunno why I even wrote it <.>

Nvm, a corrected version of that file:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=KL7Y2A38

Edit:
(Chapter 6)
-As a <<Coeurl>> with a strong body, it simply like she had no injuries, but underneath the skin on her cheek were traces of a beating.
+As a <<Coeurl>> with a strong body, it's simply like she had no injuries, but underneath the skin on her cheek were traces of a beating.
or
+As a <<Coeurl>> with a strong body, it simply looks like she had no injuries, but underneath the skin on her cheek were traces of a beating.
« Last Edit: December 12, 2009, 03:05:23 pm by uey111 »

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #94 on: December 17, 2009, 03:17:54 am »
First, thanks for the translation!
I just started playing Chapter 1 and I noticed when Gii and Ati are walking to the monorail and Gii mentions Stoicism in the same line he says Seikyou.
The line exactly is:

Gii:  In Seikyou they seem to call it Stoicism.  I wonder what it's called now?

Was just wondering if you left it untranslated on purpose because I looked it up and it does have a translation?
Don't think I saw anyone else mention this so just wanted to know.
Thanks.

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #95 on: December 17, 2009, 11:16:18 am »
First, thanks for the translation!
I just started playing Chapter 1 and I noticed when Gii and Ati are walking to the monorail and Gii mentions Stoicism in the same line he says Seikyou.
The line exactly is:

Gii:  In Seikyou they seem to call it Stoicism.  I wonder what it's called now?

Was just wondering if you left it untranslated on purpose because I looked it up and it does have a translation?
Don't think I saw anyone else mention this so just wanted to know.
Thanks.
Stoicism is an actual English word with not infrequent usage; it refers to a type of philosophy, it has a more general everyday meaning, regarding having guarded emotions, and a more specific one referring directly to a type of philosophy practiced by the ancient Greeks.

Seikyou is a fantasy term for another nation that is used in the world of Inganock.  There is no translation for this term.  It would be like trying to translate Rohan, or Hogwarts, IMO.

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #96 on: December 17, 2009, 07:27:08 pm »
Was just wondering if you left it untranslated on purpose because I looked it up and it does have a translation?

It does not have a translation. The word you're looking at is 西亨 seikyou, not one of the real Japanese words also pronounced seikyou (政教, 生協, 盛況, 性教, 正教 and 清教). As Balcerzak said, 西亨 seikyou is a fictional name and has no inherent meaning.

*edit*

Forgot to mention, the uey111 posts earlier have all been dealt with.
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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #97 on: December 17, 2009, 10:06:30 pm »
Was just wondering if you left it untranslated on purpose because I looked it up and it does have a translation?

It does not have a translation. The word you're looking at is 西亨 seikyou, not one of the real Japanese words also pronounced seikyou (政教, 生協, 盛況, 性教, 正教 and 清教). As Balcerzak said, 西亨 seikyou is a fictional name and has no inherent meaning.

*edit*

Forgot to mention, the uey111 posts earlier have all been dealt with.

Oooohhh...  Now I see haha.  Didn't know the kanji actually differed too.  :-X
Thanks for answering my question!  :D

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #98 on: December 17, 2009, 10:12:22 pm »
Oooohhh...  Now I see haha.  Didn't know the kanji actually differed too.  :-X
Thanks for answering my question!  :D

Welcome. And yeah, Japanese is filled with kanji homonyms like this. Never ever ever ever look anything up based on romaji alone if you want authoritative results.
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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #99 on: December 18, 2009, 03:52:22 pm »
because the new patch keep making me lose all the cg, I try to get it again all from the beginning. but when I finish chapter 4 inner voice, it just give me a blank screen and I can't move on. Is it some problem in the patch? from chapter 5 it's normal again  ???

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #100 on: December 18, 2009, 04:01:44 pm »
Probably the usual save problems. Start from the beginning and ctrl to where you left off to solve it for good, but you can probably get by simply by trying to load all of your old saves. This should only happen at the end of whichever partial you played (ie, chapter 4 or chapter 8).
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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #101 on: December 18, 2009, 04:08:26 pm »
well, I load all my old save data but the problem only occurs in chapter 4. chapter 8 is working fine to me  ???

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #102 on: December 18, 2009, 04:22:00 pm »
I just tried this loading a save not too far behind the Inner Voices section, and it works fine for me so it's definitely not the script. As mentioned previously in this thread, when a script changes too much during compilation, the game refuses to load it properly when you load a save. This causes blank screens or other glitches to occur. There's nothing you can do about it.

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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #103 on: December 19, 2009, 06:43:11 am »
Just continuing off from the beginning of Chapter 4 now that the full patch is out and it seems a spelling mistake/typo slipped through.

[David] So he finally said it.
You two are quite fiesty, aren't you?


The first scene where Gii meets Ati in Ch4. After meeting up with the Automaton and finding out that Mr. Klein is dead.

Edit: missing space and spelling mistake/typo in Chapter 5:
----My gaze won't reach someonewhose back is turned to me.
----Even so, I watched her.


By doing this, I can gain Access to the City Skyscraper's Library from long distances.
Of course, city Administration opposses such action.


Both errors take place after Iru brings Kuro-chan to Gii. While Ruaha is talking/thinking to herself.
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Re: Sekien no Inganock: General Feedback Thread
« Reply #104 on: December 19, 2009, 02:15:30 pm »
First and third fixed, along with another in-group QC report, although the second one you mentioned isn't in the complete patch.
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