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24Dec/096

Sekien no Inganock Webnovels

http://amaterasu.tindabox.net/webnovel/

All eight webnovels are now available in English.

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  1. Found a typo:
    “In other words, the First Tier houses First-Class Citizens such as industrialists and millionaires.
    In other words, the Thirteenth Tier houses Thirteenth-Class Citizens, for whom life and death hold roughly the same value.”
    It just sounds awkward. Here’s what I hope is a better version
    “In other words, the First Tier houses First-Class Citizens such as industrialists and millionaires and the Thirteenth Tier houses Thirteenth-Class Citizens, for whom life and death hold roughly the same value.”
    Not sure if you are just trying to maintain something from the original Japanese source material though, in which case my point is completely moot.

  2. It sounds like that line was probably like that in the original Japanese. (Not that I’ve read it myself, but it seems to fit the overall writing style.)

  3. Ah well, then leave it. Just sounded weird while I read it.

  4. Definitely writing style, although to me combining them into one uber-long sentence is equally awkward.

  5. Oh man.

    Ixrec, your love for cats knows no bounds.

  6. It’s definitely the narrative style– you can see parallel syntax like this all over the place in the VN, I’m only 4 chapters in because I decided to play the drinking game that they made and I keep getting housed by:

    <> ten years ago.

    Chapter 1 actually got me entirely wasted because of the Clown.


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